tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5024234731370405031.post7368322562705212041..comments2014-12-07T14:28:00.871-08:00Comments on Max Pardoe AS Media: Dredd Essaymphttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10218478061706820518noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5024234731370405031.post-90892529808287829192014-10-05T07:32:11.376-07:002014-10-05T07:32:11.376-07:00Max
An essay should not include subheadings, it s...Max<br /><br />An essay should not include subheadings, it should be a piece of prose which is subdivided into paragraphs. In future ensure your essays actually follow the essay structure.<br /><br />Why would not attracting a younger audience mean it failed to make money? Are they the largest cinema demographic? Remember to always justify and prove your explanations. Also, why have you not mentioned the stars at this point in your essay? Surely star power is key to success?<br /><br />You must supply figures for the the distribution pattern of the film, how many screens was the film shown on and what % of these were 3D? Why might that have impacted on the films success. Why is being released after The Raid important? Remember to mention audience categories and explain how similar audiences might overlap.<br /><br />There is a lot of work to be done Max, you MUST delvelop an sense of argument and opinion, currently you give examples supported by incredibly vague explanantions which lack the required depth.<br /><br />Take time to look at Sophie Marlow's response<br /><br />http://sophiemarlowelcmedia1415.blogspot.co.uk/2014/09/why-did-dredd-fail-at-box-office.html<br /><br />What impact might Travis not being involved in the edit have on the final product?Mr Smithhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12759789197085658607noreply@blogger.com